Ajin Request (Colored)

I think the mood might be holding this piece back. I love how the ghost looks, and by itself it would make a very cool and creepy piece, but the guy character does seem a bit out of place. Perhaps it's his facial expression, which seems more annoyed than scared. It would also be nice to have a bit more in the background to add context. Where is this character and why is the ghost after him? An old, decaying house interior could hint that he just stumbled upon the ghost, or indications of substance abuse like alcohol bottles in the background could show that the ghost is more an embodiment of his own inner problems. I think if the story was a bit clearer, then every character would make sense together and everything would feel more consistent. Hope that helps! And btw I really do love the design of your ghost!